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Monday, October 18, 2021

A moment in time

I heard the waves splashing around.

I heard my Mum saying let’s go to the library.

I saw a library tall as a tree that was two stories high.

I felt the wind blowing past fast around the area.

I felt the hotness of the sun shining at me.

I wondered how the library look like in the inside.

I wondered if there is fish swimming around the beach.


I wrote about a memory in school holidays and I wrote about this one.

2 comments:

  1. WOW Kevin very descriptive story I liked how you said, I heard the waves splashing around

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  2. Hi Kevin, I love the library sentence. I like how you compared the library to the tree.

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